Final draft update

After recieveing my preliminary draft feedback, I am going to fix my introduction paragraph to make it more clear and make it flow better. I am also going to add more body paragraphs so that I can prove my argument with more details and evidence and add a conclusion. I would like to add another two or three pages to my paper to make it better. Also, I am going to add about two or three more sources including a book. Other then this I am confident that I am going in the right direction with writing this research paper.